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Trend of Graduates and Postgraduates after the course completion in UK 2008

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The two bar graphs shows the future plans of the UK students after completing their graduation or post graduation for 2008. Two graphs gives the valuable insights which helps universities, students and also goverment. In first chart, it is clear that most of the students go for the higher studies to do some speciallisation in their field. Although students are also likely to go for part-time job opportunity to take break from study and gain some practical knowledge. Unemployment rate is quite higher after the graduation. Few students choose to do voluntary work (self employee) after their graduation. Second graph shows somehow similar trend as of first graph. In both after graduation and post graduation most of the students go for the future studies. On the contary choice of part-time work is higher after the postgraduation than the graduation. The unemployment and voluntary work count is in same proporation in both the cases. To sum up, after the graduation and postgraduation future education is common choice among the students. Part-time job is favourite second favorite things that graduates and postgraduates wants to do after completion of their study.
The two bar
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the future plans of the UK
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after completing their
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graduation
or post
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for 2008. Two
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gives the valuable insights which
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universities,
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and
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.

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chart, it is
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that most of the
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go for the higher
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to do
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some
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speciallisation
in their field. Although
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students
are
also
likely to go for part-time job opportunity to take break from
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study
and gain
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some
practical knowledge. Unemployment rate is quite higher after the
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graduation
. Few
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students
choose to do voluntary work (self employee) after their graduation.

Second
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somehow similar trend as of
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. In both after
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graduation
and post
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graduation
most of the
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go for the future
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studies
. On the
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choice of part-time work is higher after the
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postgraduation
than the
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graduation
. The unemployment and voluntary work count is in same
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proporation
in both the cases.

To sum up, after the
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and
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postgraduation
future education is common choice among the
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students
. Part-time job is
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second favorite things that graduates and postgraduates wants to do after completion of their
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IELTS academic Trend of Graduates and Postgraduates after the course completion in UK 2008

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