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Some people think that sports are compiled while others think that teaches should be learn about team work. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some people think that sports are compiled while others think that teaches should be learn about team work. Yk2Mm
Sports and team work both plays integral and indespensible role in our life. Certain folks opine that Children should learn about sports but other thinks that children should guide about team work. I would explicate the both view and my opinion in subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, sports are necessary for children because it helps to maintain health as well as it bestow to get name and fame in world. For instance, some children have not good in academic but they always give good performance in sports. So with the help of sports they can easily servive in their life. Furthermore, team work is important because it give opportunity to do work according to time, it is time saving method. It helps to maintain co operation between employees and organisations.
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IELTS academic Some people think that sports are compiled while others think that teaches should be learn about team work.

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