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The news media plays an important role in the modern society. Why are they important? Do they have positive impact?

The news media plays an important role in the modern society. Why are they important? Do they have positive impact? m82O1
In thiscutting edge era, news mediaCan be seen everywhere. In that case, news media such as newspapers and magazines are being a major part in certain demographic of society. In my view, there are plethora of positive impact and why are they important. To start with, reading news from news media will enhance our knowledge. Reading news and gaining informations from newspapers and magazines will make us smarter, as we can learn and adapt new informations daily. When people start to read newspaper, as days goes by people will be filled with full of information than the others and will be aware of what’s happening. No one can deny that news media is a source of knowledge to others. Another reason why news media gives a positive impact is, it can improve our reading skills. Reading skills are very important because without I reading skills it will be hard for us to fill up a form or to get a stable job. That is why certain people will start buying newspaper and magazines for their children to start reading at a very young age. If reading skills are improved, they will have a better future to depend on. To sum up, news media are very important because they can enhance our knowledge and can improve our reading skills. Personally, I believe that news media gives a positive impact nowadays.
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IELTS academic The news media plays an important role in the modern society. Why are they important? Do they have positive impact?

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