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Talk about a special holiday or trip.

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Well, to be honest, I am a travelholic and I have been to many places in my holiday. However, the most memorable vacation was the trip to Sa Pa, a famous tourist destination in Viet Nam. It was the last summer vacation when I visited this area. It is a remote town, located in northwest vietnam, so it took me approximately 7 hours to get there. It was a long and tiring journey but right at the moment I got off the bus, I was overwhelmed enough by the breathtaking view that i utterly forgot how i was be dead on my feet. After booking a hotel, i immediately started to go sightseeing and explore this place. My hotel was near to sapa church so i went there first and took a lot of photographs there because i am concerned about french architecture. I also went trekking in fansipan mountain, of course. in the event that you come to this town, you must try participating in some traditional activities held by the villagers. I got the opportunity to take part in the love market festival, which is a cultural feature in sa pa. It was a 3 day trip and i enjoyed every moments of the holiday. Owing to this vacation, i could let my hair down, got some fresh air and refresh my mind and body. Besides, this was a family trip, hence we could spend a quality of time together and build close knit relationship with each other. Last but not least, the people living in sapa was hospitable and enthusiastic, when i visited the town, receiving their warm and affectionate greetings made me feel at home.

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