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travellers using three major airports of UK

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This table shows the data about number of visitors using three different UK Airports named as Gatwick, Heathrow and Stansted during five year period from 1998 to 2003. Overall it can be seen that Gatwick and Stansted airports have an upward trend whereas Heathrow faced some fluctuations during this period. During 1998 27. 2 million people travelled using Heathrow and it was on rise till year 2000 in which 48. 2 million people travelled. It went down to 33. 2 million in next two consecutive years but in 2003 it rose again and 45. 6 million travelers were observed. Gatwick Started at 36. 5 million visitors in 1998 and it rose significantly by 10% in 2001 at 47. 3 million visitors however it kept on surge till 2003 and the biggest number of travelling was seen which was 69. 3 million. However on the other hand Stansted started from 17. 3 million travelers in 1998 and it kept on rising till 2000 but then during next three years the figure remain constant at 43. 3 million travelers
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UK Airports named as Gatwick, Heathrow and
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Stansted
during five
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period from 1998 to 2003.

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that Gatwick and
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Stansted
airports have an upward trend whereas Heathrow faced
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fluctuations during this period.

During 1998 27. 2
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travelled using Heathrow and it was on rise till
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2000 in which 48. 2
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travelled. It went down to 33. 2
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in 2003 it rose again and 45. 6
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Gatwick
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at 36. 5
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visitors in 1998 and it rose
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visitors
however
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on surge till 2003 and the biggest number of travelling was
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which was 69. 3
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Stansted
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travelers in 1998 and it
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IELTS academic travellers using three major airports of UK

Academic
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4 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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