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The given bar chart compares hot desert weather of grasslands in two different year; 1980 and 2000. Overall, it can be evicted from the graphs that in 1980, July and august has lower value than other months. Whereas, in 2000, July, august and November has highest hot climate weather. However, it is fact that over 20 year of period overall temperature drop down. According to bar graph, in 1980, in march there has hottest climate in grassland which is approximately 325mm. Following to this weather dramatically drop until July. Then it rose steadily till December. Furthermore, January and February shares almost same weather which is nearly 250mm. In 2000 there is no particular trend it was fluctuated in the whole year. Moreover, July, august and November hits the highest hot climate which is 53mm. Also, January, may, June and October shares the same temperature (51 mm). On contrary, February, march and April has lowest temperature. At last, in September and December climate is moderate.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 bar chart compares hot desert You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclimate
weather
 of grasslands in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 year; 1980 and 2000.

Overall
, it can be evicted
 from the graphs that in 1980, July and august has lower value than other months. Whereas, in 2000, July, august and November has A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".the highest
highest
 hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclimate
weather
. However
, it is fact that over 20 year of period overall
 temperature This phrase is redundant. Consider using "drop".drop
drop down
.

According to bar graph, in 1980, in The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
 there has A determiner is probably missing here: "the hottest".the hottest
hottest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
 in grassland which is approximately Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "325 mm"325 mm
325mm
. Following to this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclimate
weather
dramatically
 drop until July. Then it rose steadily
 till December. Furthermore
, January and February shares almost same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclimate
weather
 which is nearly
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "250 mm"250 mm
250mm
.

In 2000 there is no particular trend it was fluctuated
 in the whole year. Moreover
, July, august and November hits the highest hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
 which is Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "53 mm"53 mm
53mm
. Also
, January, may, June and October shares the same temperature (51 mm). On contrary, February, march and April has A determiner is probably missing here: "the lowest".the lowest
lowest
 temperature. At last, in September and December You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
 is moderate. 