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bar chart summery. discuss and give opinion

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The given bar chart compares hot desert weather of grasslands in two different year; 1980 and 2000. Overall, it can be evicted from the graphs that in 1980, July and august has lower value than other months. Whereas, in 2000, July, august and November has the highest hot climate weather. However, it is fact that over 20 year of period overall temperature drop. According to bar graph, in 1980, in March there has the hottest temperature in grassland which is approximately 325 mm. Following to this climate dramatically drop until July. Then it rose steadily till December. Furthermore, January and February shares almost same weather which is nearly 250 mm. In 2000 there is no particular trend it was fluctuated in the whole year. Moreover, July, august and November hits the highest hot climate which is 53 mm. Also, January, may, June and October shares the same temperature (51 mm). On contrary, February, march and April has the lowest temperature. At last, in September and December climate is moderate.
The
given
bar chart compares hot desert weather of grasslands in two
different
year; 1980 and 2000.

Overall
, it can
be evicted
from the graphs that in 1980, July and august has lower value than other months. Whereas, in 2000, July, august and November has the highest hot
climate
weather.
However
, it is fact that over 20 year of period
overall
temperature
drop.

According to bar graph, in 1980, in March there has the hottest
temperature
in grassland which is approximately 325 mm. Following to this
climate
dramatically
drop until July. Then it rose
steadily
till December.
Furthermore
, January and February shares almost same weather which is
nearly
250 mm.

In 2000 there is no particular trend it
was fluctuated
in the whole year.
Moreover
, July, august and November hits the highest hot
climate
which is 53 mm.
Also
, January, may, June and October shares the same
temperature
(51 mm). On contrary, February, march and April has the lowest
temperature
. At last, in September and December
climate
is moderate.
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