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town of newport 1980 2010

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The two maps illustrate how the town of Newport changed from 1980 to 2010. Overall, it is evident that the town became more accessible for the people and the amenities have also increased. The major modifications in the east include the widening and extension of the road from the eastern to the western end of the town. It can also be noted that private dwellings have been replaced by an apartment building with a factory next to it. The railway station has also been removed and the track now runs through the south part of the town as well. In the south, there used to be only a parking, school and a hospital in 1980. In 2010, however, the school is nowhere to be seen as a shopping center has been constructed in its place. To the south part of the extended road is a university with sports ground to the left of it. The parking are and hospital have reduced in size but are still located closely. The railway station from the east have been move to west by 2010, and is also smaller than before.
The two maps illustrate how the
town
of Newport
changed
from 1980 to 2010.

Overall
, it is evident that the
town
became more accessible for the
people
and the amenities have
also
increased.

The major modifications in the east include the widening and extension of the road from the eastern to the western
end
of the
town
. It can
also
be noted
that private dwellings have
been replaced
by an apartment building with a factory
next
to it. The railway station has
also
been removed
and the
track
now
runs through the south part of the
town
as well
.

In the south, there
used
to be
only
a parking, school and a hospital in 1980. In 2010,
however
, the school is nowhere to be
seen
as a shopping center has
been constructed
in its place. To the south part of the extended road is a university with sports ground to the
left
of it. The parking are and hospital have
reduced
in size
but
are
still
located
closely
. The railway station from the east have been
move
to west by 2010, and is
also
smaller than
before
.
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IELTS academic town of newport 1980 2010

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
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