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The given tabular chart depicts the information about the opened underground railway stations in six nations.

The given tabular chart depicts the information about the opened underground railway stations in six nations. B7q3V
The given tabular chart depicts the information about the opened underground railway stations in six nations. Overall, It is lucid that, the largest route of trains were bulit in London, Whilst the lowest route was constructed in Kyoto as compared to other cities. Moving to Detail, underground railway system first one was started by London in 1826 with 3940 highest Kilometer of route carry with 775 millions travellers. However, in 1980, Underground station was opened by Paris within 1990 Killometure of route and 116 millions panserger. Tokyo established their Underground railway system in 1997 along it 15. 5 kilometre of route also carry maximum passengers per 1927 millions. Proving further, in 1976 umleground rail system was started by writinington as well as 126 route of kilometer and 144 millions people in per person, while in 2001 in this time period Los Angeles opened new Underground railway system also with kilometre of route and carry passenges pere 28 and 50millions, respectivelly.
The
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given
tabular chart depicts the information about the opened
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underground
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railway
stations in six nations.

Overall
, It is lucid that, the largest
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route
of trains were
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bulit
in London, Whilst the lowest
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route
was constructed
in Kyoto as compared to other cities.

Moving to Detail,
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underground
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railway
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system
first
one was
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started
by London in 1826 with 3940 highest
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Kilometer
of
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route
carry with 775
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millions
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travellers
.
However
, in 1980,
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Underground
station
was opened
by Paris within 1990
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Killometure
of
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route
and 116
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millions
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panserger
. Tokyo established their
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Underground
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railway
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system
in 1997 along it 15. 5
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kilometre
of
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route
also
carry maximum passengers per 1927 millions.

Proving
further
, in 1976
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umleground
rail
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system
was
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started
by
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writinington
as well
as 126
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route
of kilometer and 144
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millions
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people
in per person, while in 2001 in this time period Los Angeles opened new
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Underground
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railway
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system
also
with
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kilometre
of
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route
and carry
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passenges
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pere
28 and
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50millions
,
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respectivelly
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IELTS academic The given tabular chart depicts the information about the opened underground railway stations in six nations.

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160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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