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Tourism in the United Kingdom contributes billions of pounds sterling to the UK economy. The table below identifies the twelve most visited paid admission attractions in the UK in 1999 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Tourism in the United Kingdom contributes billions of pounds sterling to the UK economy. The table below identifies the twelve most visited paid admission attractions in the UK in 1999 and 2000. n6Qpe
The table presents the information about the most popular places with an entry fee in the UK in the year 1999 and 2000. Overall, it can be seen that out of twelve attractions only two places have positive percentage changes the rest of the places had negative in percentage change or else not applicable. Flamingo land theme park and zoo and Victoria and Albert Museum noted the increament in the number of visitors in 2000, that is 8. 7% and 7. 4% respectively, whereas attractions namely Science Museum and Madame Tussaud's declined drastically in compare to rest of the attractive places which is noted as -9. 8% and -9. 5% correspondingly. Two of the fascinated places were not opened in 1999 and therefore, there was neither increase or decrease in percentage change, which were Millennium Dome and British Airways London Eye. Alton Towers, which is located in Alton along with Natural History Museum, which is located in London, England just had a minor difference of -0. 4%. There was a -7. 0% change were seen in Tower of London and Canterbury Cathedral in which Tower of London was the highest in %change. The third highest in %change was Legoland Windor, which is located in Windsor, England was -8. 0% and Tower of London was visited more by visitors with -5. 2% change.
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, which were Millennium Dome and British Airways London Eye.

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IELTS academic Tourism in the United Kingdom contributes billions of pounds sterling to the UK economy. The table below identifies the twelve most visited paid admission attractions in the UK in 1999 and 2000.

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