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The diagram provides the process of growing bananas which are for selling in supermarkets.

The diagram provides the process of growing bananas which are for selling in supermarkets. xmW91

The diagram provides the process of growing bananas which are for selling in supermarkets. Overall, from the diagram it can be seen that, in the process there are seven stages, which starts from growing stage, it takes about nine to twelve months with lots of rain and ends with buying stage. The process starts with growing stage, bananas grow about nine to twelve months period of time at 25-30*C, with lots of rain, then bananas are cut by worker when bananas still green in packing stage after that bananas are checked and good fruit is kept but bad fruit is thrown away by workers in checking stage. Next, bananas are delivered by ship at 13. 3*C in fridges in shipping stage, bananas are kept in special rooms where bananas become yellow after resting stage bananas are delivered to supermarkets by trucks in delivering stage finely bananas are bought by costumers in the last stage.

The diagram provides the process of growing bananas which are for selling in supermarkets.

Overall
, from the diagram it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, in the process there are seven You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from growing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, it takes about nine to twelve months with lots of rain and ends with buying stage.

The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with growing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, bananas grow about nine to twelve months period of time at 25-Replace by the typographical symbol.30×C30·C
30*C
, with lots of rain, then bananas are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 by worker when bananas still
 green in packing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 after that bananas are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 fruit is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 fruit is thrown
 away by workers in checking stage.

Next
, bananas are delivered
 by ship at 13. Replace by the typographical symbol.3×C3·C
3*C
 in fridges in shipping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, bananas are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in special rooms where bananas become yellow after resting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 bananas are delivered
 to supermarkets by trucks in delivering You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
finely
 bananas are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 by costumers in the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
. 