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The table illustrates the processes in which a tourist resort can develop and grow

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The diagram illustrates seven different stages of the development of a tourist resort. According to the data, the first step is setting up a new hotels. After new hotels are built their main task is to directly create jobs in the hotels. The next step of hotel establishment is cooperating with local businesses which can supply their services to the hotels, by this decision more other companies would be attracted to the area. Subsequently, more indirectly jobs would be created in the area. It can lead workers to spend their income in the local are
The diagram illustrates seven
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different
stages of the development of a tourist resort.

According to the data, the
first
step is setting up a new
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hotels
. After new
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hotels
are built
their main task is to
directly
create jobs in the
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hotels
. The
next
step of
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hotel
establishment is cooperating with local businesses which can supply their services to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotels
, by this decision more other
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companies
would
be attracted
to the area.
Subsequently
, more
indirectly
jobs would
be created
in the area. It can lead workers to spend their income in the local
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are
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the processes in which a tourist resort can develop and grow

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
94 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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