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Topic: The diagram below shows how hydroelectric power is used to produce electricity energy .

Topic: The diagram below shows how hydroelectric power is used to produce electricity energy. KlrRw

The diagram process illustrates generating of electricity in a hydroelectric power station. It is clear that this diagram involves four steps of producing hydroelectric power, at the first step, water of river is collected behind the dam in a high-level reservoir. During days the collection of water flows to intake which is open and the following water passed through the way so as to inter to power station. In next stage, turbines are moved by power of followed water then hydroelectric power generates; after that water follows in reservoir with low level. During nights water of this reservoir follows to generator then the water is pumped to intake and in last step it follows to high-level reservoir for completing the cycle process.

The diagram process illustrates generating of electricity in a hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 station.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that this diagram involves four steps of producing hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
, at the first
 step, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 of river is collected
 behind the dam in a high-level reservoir.

During days the collection of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 flows to intake which is open and the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 passed through the way 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
 inter to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 station. In next
 stage, turbines are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 of followed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 then hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 generates; after that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 follows in reservoir with low level.

During nights You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 of this reservoir follows to generator then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 to intake and in last step it follows to high-level reservoir for completing the cycle process. 