Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Topic: The diagram below shows how hydroelectric power is used to produce electricity energy .

Topic: The diagram below shows how hydroelectric power is used to produce electricity energy. KlrRw
The diagram process illustrates generating of electricity in a hydroelectric power station. It is clear that this diagram involves four steps of producing hydroelectric power, at the first step, water of river is collected behind the dam in a high-level reservoir. During days the collection of water flows to intake which is open and the following water passed through the way so as to inter to power station. In next stage, turbines are moved by power of followed water then hydroelectric power generates; after that water follows in reservoir with low level. During nights water of this reservoir follows to generator then the water is pumped to intake and in last step it follows to high-level reservoir for completing the cycle process.
The diagram process illustrates generating of electricity in a hydroelectric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
station.

It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that this diagram involves four steps of producing hydroelectric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
, at the
first
step,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
of river
is collected
behind the dam in a high-level reservoir.

During days the collection of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
flows to intake which is open and the following
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
passed through the way
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
inter to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
station. In
next
stage, turbines are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
of followed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
then hydroelectric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
power
generates; after that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
follows in reservoir with low level.

During nights
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
of this reservoir follows to generator then the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is pumped
to intake and in last step it follows to high-level reservoir for completing the cycle process.

IELTS academic Topic: The diagram below shows how hydroelectric power is used to produce electricity energy.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
122 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • The maps below show the place of university sports centere in present time and also show the changes in the future plans.
    The given pictures illustrate the place of university sports centere in present time and also show the changes in the future plans. It can be seen that there will be a few similiarities but many differences in two places. The only that places remain the same in university sports center, over next y...
  • The table gives information about five types of vehicles
    Illustrated in the table is the number of vehicles registered in Australia in three different years 2010, 2012, 2014. Overall, it can be seen that the overall trend of five kinds of vehicles were upward over the period shown. Another key feature is that Pasenger vehicles were the highest but motorc...
  • One of the first things you want to make sure that you are able to do is identfy one of these questions when it arises.
    The pie chart depicts the use of different sources of energy in the USA in two decades – 1980s and 1990s. An overview of the diagram shows that the major source of energy in the USA was oil in both decades, and the use of nuclear power as a source of energy doubled in just ten years. The graphs sho...
  • Revenge of the geeks argumentative essay
    In the argumentative essay “Revenge of the Geeks” by Alexanda Robbins, the author argues about the qualities that make people different and make them targets. The quote in the story, “Taylor Swift's classmates left the lunch table as soon as she sat down because they disdained her taste for country ...
  • Countries where Chinese studied (2014-2016)
    The chart shows that changes the amount of Chinese students who studied in five countries such as USA, New Zealand, UK, Germany and Japan over period between 2014 and 2016. The chart gives the information that the leading amount of students belongs to USA. As the numbers the second was New Zealand ...
  • the occupations of employees
    The bar chart illustrates the occupations of employees according to their gender in the UK in the year 2005. In general, males mainly hold positions as traders and managers while women prefer paper works and work in service field. The biggest percentage of men is skilled traders, which is 20%, wher...





Get more results for topic:
  • Topic: The diagram below shows how hydroelectric power is used to produce electricity energy .