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Countries where Chinese studied (2014-2016)

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The chart shows that changes the amount of Chinese students who studied in five countries such as USA, New Zealand, UK, Germany and Japan over period between 2014 and 2016. The chart gives the information that the leading amount of students belongs to USA. As the numbers the second was New Zealand after USA. On the other hand, Germany and Japan have less amount of students than USA, New Zealand and UK. Likewise, UK is also less amount of students than USA and New Zealand, while it has more amount of students than Germany and Japan. It is clear that the amount of students had been increasing steadily in USA. Likewise, amount of students in New Zealand and UK increased from 2014 to 2015, but then it became stable in 2016. However, the amount of students in Germany and Japan, firstly it decreased in 2015, and then increased in 2016. In 2014, there were approximately 2600 students in USA, after that it increased to approximately 2800, the new students was almost 200 students. However, in other countries there was not significant increasing like in USA.
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