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The table gives information about five types of vehicles

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Illustrated in the table is the number of vehicles registered in Australia in three different years 2010, 2012, 2014. Overall, it can be seen that the overall trend of five kinds of vehicles were upward over the period shown. Another key feature is that Pasenger vehicles were the highest but motorcycles have experienced the fastest growth. At the outset of the survey, in 2010, the number roes 11. 8 millions before going up 13 millions until 20214. The number of Commercial has lower register than passenger while percentage increase higher. Another type of vehicles, A dramatic climb in the number of motorcycles was recorded in the period about 30. 8%. During the same period, the numbers of heavy trucks registered also rose with a mind of 8. 3% and light truck went up 23. 5%, respectively.
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registered in Australia in three
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years 2010, 2012, 2014.

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were upward over the period shown. Another key feature is that
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Pasenger
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were the highest
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motorcycles have experienced the fastest growth.

At the outset of the survey, in 2010, the
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roes 11. 8 millions
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going up 13 millions until 20214. The
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of Commercial has lower register than passenger while percentage increase higher.

Another type of
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, A dramatic climb in the
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of motorcycles
was recorded
in the period about 30. 8%. During the same period, the
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of heavy trucks registered
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IELTS academic The table gives information about five types of vehicles

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4 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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