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The pie chart depicts the use of different sources of energy in the USA in two decades – 1980s and 1990s. An overview of the diagram shows that the major source of energy in the USA was oil in both decades, and the use of nuclear power as a source of energy doubled in just ten years. The graphs show that oil was the main energy source for the USA which was used to produce 42% energy in the 1980s and 33% in 1990s. It shows that oil produced energy declined in 1990. Around one-fourth of energy in the USA came from natural gas both in these decades. The use of nuclear power as a source of energy increases and it produced 10% energy in the 1990s which was double than the percentage of energy production from this source in the previous decade. The production of energy from coal in the 1980s was around 22% and it increases by 5% in 1990s. It is very surprising to notice that the production of energy from hydroelectric power remained the same (i. e. 5%) in both decades
The pie chart depicts the
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in the USA in two decades
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1980s and 1990s. An overview of the diagram
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that the major
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of
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in the USA was oil in both decades, and the
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of nuclear power as a
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doubled in
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ten years.

The graphs
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that oil was the main
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for the USA which was
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to produce 42%
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in the 1980s and 33%
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in 1990s
. It
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that oil produced
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declined in 1990. Around one-fourth of
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in the USA came from natural gas both in these decades. The
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of nuclear power as a
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of
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increases and it produced 10%
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in the 1990s which was
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double
than the percentage of
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production from this
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in the previous decade. The production of
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from coal in the 1980s was around 22% and it increases by 5%
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in 1990s
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surprising to notice that the production of
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from hydroelectric power remained the same (
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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