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The maps below show the place of university sports centere in present time and also show the changes in the future plans.

The maps below show the place of university sports centere in present time and also show the changes in the future plans. 0EO89
The given pictures illustrate the place of university sports centere in present time and also show the changes in the future plans. It can be seen that there will be a few similiarities but many differences in two places. The only that places remain the same in university sports center, over next years will be changing room, pool and seating. Outdors courts in the west of university sports centere will be demolished and leisure pool is planned to build. Outdoor courts in the East of sports centere will be demolished and instead of outdoor courts sport hall will be built in the East of sports center. Changing room in the south- east will be constructed and cafe in next to changing room will be built. This changes will become very comfortable to university sports center will be expandend than before. Changing room in the south-west will be constructed and sports will be built next to changing room. Overview, a number of spectacular changes will be took place.
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pictures illustrate the place of
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university
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sports
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centere
in present time and
also
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show
the
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changes
in the future plans. It can be
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that there will be a few
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similiarities
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but
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many
differences in two places.

The
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that places remain the same in
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university
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sports
center, over
next
years will be
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changing
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room
, pool and seating.
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Outdors
courts in the west of
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university
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sports
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centere
will
be demolished
and leisure pool
is planned
to build. Outdoor courts in the East of
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sports
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centere
will
be demolished
and
instead
of outdoor courts
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sport
hall will
be built
in the East of
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sports
center.

Changing
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room
in the south- east will
be constructed
and
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in
next
to
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changing
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room
will
be built
. This
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changes
will become
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very
comfortable to
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university
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sports
center will be
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expandend
than
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before
.
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Changing
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room
in the south-west will
be constructed
and
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sports
will
be built
next
to
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changing
room.

Overview, a number of spectacular
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changes
will be
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IELTS academic The maps below show the place of university sports centere in present time and also show the changes in the future plans.

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