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topic on gender equality and changes happened from past 50 years in society .

topic on gender equality and changes happened from past 50 years in society. x0bAQ

From chat we can illustrates about gender equality from past 50 years. There is a dramatical change from past 50 years to till date. Before only males can go out for studies and getting jobs, females are in home only. No higher studies also not allowed for girls. But now a days girls also going for higher studies equal to boys and getting jobs. If we took the graph before male employers are higher in count but now almost both are equal. Apart from that in all activities women's are participating as equal to men. Moreover, women will do extra activities like householding things maintaining house and raising kids, taking care of family apart from outside job. Especially women's participating in all national competitions also like sports and getting medals for country making their country proud as equal to men. As conclusion, all age groups of women's achieved many things compare to men's and playing equal role as men's in society now a days. Its a good sign.

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