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The bar chart describes the figure of the total community of the global in India, China, USA and Japan in 1950, 2002 and 2050.

The bar chart describes the figure of the total community of the global in India, China, USA and Japan in 1950, 2002 and 2050. pXDjd
The bar chart describes the figure of the total community of the global in India, China, USA and Japan in 1950, 2002 and 2050. It is clear that the number of people who lived in China in 1950, 2002 and 2050 was the highest. On the other hand, in Japan, the proportion of nations was the lowest. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that Chinese in 1950, 2002, and projections for 2050 had peaked at 23, 20 and 15 percent respectively. In contrast, the number of Japanese was the lowest total population in the four countries. In 3 years, the population almost kept unchanged and under 5 percent. On the one hand, the number of Italians increased steadily in three years, from 15 percent to approximately 20 percent. Moreover, at the same time, the total population in America had 7 percent in 1950 and 5 percent in 2002, 2050.
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the figure of the total community of the global in India, China, USA and Japan in 1950, 2002 and 2050.

It is
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that the number of
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who
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in China in 1950, 2002 and 2050 was the highest.
On the other hand
, in Japan, the proportion of nations was the lowest.

Looking at the chart more
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, one can
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that Chinese in 1950, 2002, and projections for 2050 had peaked at 23, 20 and 15
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respectively
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In contrast
, the number of Japanese was the lowest total population in the four countries. In 3 years, the population almost
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kept
unchanged and under 5 percent.

On the one hand, the number of Italians increased
steadily
in three years, from 15
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to approximately 20
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.
Moreover
, at the same time, the total population in America had 7
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in 1950 and 5
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in 2002, 2050.
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