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The graph illustrates result from a survey which resarched most popular honeymoon locations for newly married 5000 couples in Britania, in 2010. In general what stands out from the chart is that Thailand is most popular place for sponsal between couples. Most of the couples prefer tropic places for their honeymoon. More than %20 of the people who comleted the survey prefer Thailand, just ahead of Bali with 1335. Costa Rica was third most popular destination for honeymooners at 750, although this was more popular than The Maldives, at 600. The Greek Islands came next which was twice as popular as Paris with 432 and 209 couples, respectively. This was followed by Spain with 140 and bottom of the list was The Lake Distrinct at 124.
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prefer tropic places for their honeymoon.

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ahead of Bali with 1335. Costa Rica was third most
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destination for honeymooners at 750, although this was more
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than The Maldives, at 600. The Greek Islands came
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as Paris with 432 and 209
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IELTS academic Top Honeymoon Destinations

Academic
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3 paragraphs
126 words
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