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figires for consumption and production task1

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The line graph illustrates the comparison between numbers of the manufacturing and consumption of energy in the United states during the period of 1950 to 2000. Also, prediction of the figures is mentioned for the year 2025. Overall, graph depicts energy consumption was more than energy production in united states. Moreover, consumption will reach on the peak in future. Calibration of energy is 1unit equals to 1 quadrillion of British thermal units. Firstly, in the year 1950 energy production in united states was lower than consumption which was around 25 quadrillion of British thermal units. Afterwards, it is steeply raised upto 60 quadrillion of BUT's in the year 1975. Secondly, energy consumption rate in united states climbing in upward direction from the year 1975 onwords. On the contrary, production rate of energy was remain steady up to the year 2000. It is noticeable that, in future energy consumption will grow nearly, 135 quadrillion of BUT's. However, difference will be noticeable that, energy manufacturing will be less than 55 quadrillion of BUT's, and projection gap will be more in future.
The line graph illustrates the comparison between numbers of the manufacturing and
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consumption
of
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energy
in the
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United
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states
during the period of 1950 to 2000.
Also
, prediction of the figures
is mentioned
for the
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year
2025.

Overall
, graph depicts
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energy
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consumption
was more than
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energy
production in
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united
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states
.
Moreover
,
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consumption
will reach on the peak
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in future
. Calibration of
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energy
is 1unit equals to 1 quadrillion of British thermal units.

Firstly
, in the
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year
1950
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energy
production in
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united
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states
was lower than
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consumption
which was around 25 quadrillion of British thermal units. Afterwards, it is
steeply
raised
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upto
60 quadrillion of
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BUT
's in the
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year
1975.

Secondly
,
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energy
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consumption
rate in
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united
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states
climbing in upward direction from the
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year
1975
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onwords
.
On the contrary
, production rate of
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energy
was
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remain
steady up to the
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year
2000.

It is noticeable that, in future
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energy
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consumption
will grow
nearly
, 135 quadrillion of
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BUT
's.
However
, difference will be noticeable that,
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energy
manufacturing will be less than 55 quadrillion of
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BUT
's, and projection gap will be more
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in future
.
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IELTS academic figires for consumption and production task1

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
179 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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