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The dynamic graph illustrates the average number of household income and spending on food and clothes, in one UK city from 2010 to 2013.

The dynamic graph illustrates the average number of household income and spending on food and clothes, in one UK city from 2010 to 2013. 2xoNA
The given figures provide specifics about how much money family in one UK city earn and expenditure on food and clothes on average between the two years, 2010 and 2013. In general, while total earnings significantly declined after 3 years. The outlay of food and clothes have a slight increase in the same period in contrast. In 2010, it is clear that household spent most on meat and fish at a quarter. Followed by Fruits and vegetables and diary products with 22% and 20% respectively. Besides, Other food and drinks and Clothes occupied less at 18% and 15 %. As regards the pie chart for the year 2013, it is also witnessed that unlike 2010, diary product took up the majority of spendings with one third of the total. In contrast, after 3 years, Clothes and meat and fish expenditures have been reduced 10%. Only Other food and drinks which remained the same in this period.
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figures provide specifics about how much money family in one UK city earn and expenditure on
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food
and
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clothes
on average between the two years, 2010 and 2013.

In general
, while total earnings
significantly
declined after 3 years. The outlay of
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food
and
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clothes
have a slight increase in the same period
in contrast
.

In 2010, it is
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clear
that household spent most on meat and fish at a quarter. Followed by Fruits and vegetables and diary products with 22% and 20%
respectively
.
Besides
, Other
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food
and drinks and
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Clothes
occupied less at 18% and 15 %.

As regards the pie chart for the
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year
2013, it is
also
witnessed that unlike 2010, diary product took up the majority of
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spendings
with one third of the total.
In contrast
, after 3 years,
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Clothes
and meat and fish expenditures have been
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reduced
10%.
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food
and drinks which remained the same in this period.
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