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The line graph illustrates how much oil was produced and consumed in China over the period 24 years, from 1982 to 2006. First of all, as it can be seen that there is an upward trend in both of consumption and production of oil during this period. In addition to this, while oil consumption rised sharply comparison of its production. At the beginning of term, both oil consumption and production were equivalent, at around 2 million barrels for a day. Then, consumption remained constant during 8 years while production increased gradually and became 3 million barrels a day until 1986. During next years until 1994 the production stayed constant on the contrary, consumption commenced to rise and 1993 both of them were equal. In the second half of the period, oil consumption continued to go up sharply until 2006 and at the end of period peaked at about 6 million barrels. On the other hand, production rised little by little from the period 1994 to 2006, and stood 3. 5 million barrels per day.

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