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to the island before and after the development of some tourist facilities.

to the island before and after the development of some tourist facilities. 6mQPl

The given maps illustrate alterations to the island before and after the development of some tourist facilities. The general overview here is that the island has been transformed to the place for tourist activities which two accommodation, restaurant, a pier and a beach for swimming. The island is approximately 200 meters long, which a small beach on the western tip. it consisted of a scatting palm trees. Now though, there is a place to stay in form of fifteen beach hut situated in circular pattern in the center of the Island and to the west. Between these two sets of accommodation there is also a new restaurant and reception building, both served by new vehicle track. Situated in the south is a t-shaped pier for ship to dock, and sailing boats are now evident in this area of the sea. footpath have also been constructed, which traverse the island, leading to the new building and the beach, which tourist can now swim.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps illustrate alterations to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after the development of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 tourist facilities. The general overview here is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 has been transformed
 to the place for tourist activities which two accommodation, restaurant, a pier and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 for swimming.

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The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 is approximately 200 meters long, which a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
 on the western tip. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 consisted of a scatting palm trees. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 though, there is a place to stay in form of fifteen You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
Possible agreement error. The noun 'hut' seems to be countable, so consider using: "huts".huts
hut
 situated in circular pattern in the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
Island
 and to the west.

Between these two sets of accommodation there is also
 a new restaurant and reception building, both served by new vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
. Situated in the south is a t-shaped pier for ship to dock, and sailing boats are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 evident in this area of the sea. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFootpath
footpath
 have also
been constructed
, which traverse the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, leading to the new building and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorecoastwaterfront
beach
, which tourist can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 swim. 