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The pie charts show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010. DY5Kk
The following pie charts depict percentage of each type of music media used in 1990, 2000 and 2010. There are four different types of media illustrated. In 1990, the most used media is CD it is possess 55% of media. The rest of these are 20% Vinyl record and 25% cassette. By the 2000 the CD occupied 95% of media and other media types to disappear and digital audio joined for last 5%. In the 2010 digital audio increased to 60% and CD decreased to 35%, the vinyl record added again with 5%. in the end, the CD continued in used music media list and digital audio joint in it. The digital audio increased in 2010th year to 60%.
The following pie charts depict percentage of each type of music
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in 1990, 2000 and 2010. There are four
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types of
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illustrated.

In 1990, the most
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is CD it is
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55% of
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. The rest of these are 20% Vinyl record and 25% cassette. By the 2000 the CD occupied 95% of
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and other
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types to disappear and digital audio
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for last 5%. In the 2010 digital audio increased to 60% and CD decreased to 35%, the vinyl record
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again with 5%.

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, the CD continued in
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list and digital audio joint in it. The digital audio increased in 2010th year to 60%.
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IELTS academic The pie charts show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010.

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