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Title: Using the knowledge in physics and modelling of landslide susceptibility mapping for analysis Impact to the stream.

Title: Using the knowledge in physics and modelling of landslide susceptibility mapping for analysis Impact to the stream. w7ep3
Introduction: As impaction regarding landslides has increased every year, the scientist's need to shape more effective solution practices has also increased. However, researching this issue will necessarily require integrating insights across multiple factors that are related. In general, when long-time heavy rainfall, soil and rock on hillslope that is susceptible will be triggered. It significantly influences the water quality, changes in ground water-level and interrupts the stream flow channels, which can also affect the ecology system and cause destruction of the environment. Finally, those problems will be associated with the health effects for almost all creatures directly and indirectly. Landslides are a serious phenomenon geologically common to almost every province of Lao PDR, and have frequency increases to follow extreme rainfall events, global climate change, human activities increase, continuous environmental disturbance, earthquake (seismic waves), destruction of forest area, etc. This problem is able to obstruct the infrastructure development of the country. Study about landslides will use knowledge in Physics for measuring gravity, Geographic Information System (GIS) program and Modelling of Landslides Susceptibility Mapping for help in analyzing the flow of mass. It is of great significance to analyze region scales for reducing risk of sediment, mud and debris flow to streams. So, this article seeks to contribute to the method and technique development process for disaster risk prevention. Literature review: Landslides have become the most serious disasters around hilly and mountainous areas. The occurrence of landslides mostly depends on the terrain, including geological and geomorphological processes, that might have the tendency and predisposing factors to generate landslide occurrence. Laos, the only landlocked country in Southeast Asia, The Geography is covered with mountains and forests. There are two seasons: Rainy and Dry. The temperature averages about 14/40 °C (57/104 °F), which is tropical in the plains and is subtropical in the mountains. The amount of rainfall is normally between 1, 200 and 2, 200 millimeters (47 and 87 inches) per year, but on mountain slopes can exceed 3, 000 mm (118 in), which brings heavy rainfall and high humidity during May to October, it is an additional amount of rain by the monsoon and typhoons. In fact, if the climate becomes milder with increasing altitude, it will also become more rainy. For example: In Luang Prabang province, a village of 41 households was destroyed by a landslide and flash flood after heavy rainfall, there are three roads connecting 17 villages in the district that have now been cut off. (Reported by RFA’s Lao Service, On Aug. 30th and Sept. 5th 2018). and In the neighboring Oudomxay province and Phongsaly province there were almost two weeks of rainfall, afforded to livelihood and killed people by flooding and landslides. (Reported by Xinhua News, In 2013). Research purpose: I have plan to improve in my work the future and I will accomplish this research by objectives the following: To study relationships in concern with other factors in risk areas and which contribute to landslides such as heavy rainfall, climate change, seismic, etc. To use processes in physics, modelling, sediment dynamic, GIS program and satellite image for following and classifying of the mass flow, including use analyze wasting when phenomena occurred. To use as a reference for additional learning about solving and controlling the risk that affects lives and properties. Main body (methodology): In this subject a methodology for hazardous landslides, the using knowledge in physics and modeling them as a part of a disaster prevention and reduction procedure by landslides susceptibility and hazard maps is presented, based on analysis movements and determinant factors the flowing: First, review information about behaviour of geology, geography and weather in the speciality of hillslope and mountain, some issues of the difficulties related with numerical modeling in risk area, and survey on field work for collecting data and sample; Second, analyze some of the major problems and the mechanisms at the local scale, and the directions of mass movement (sediment particle) and Sediment Dynamic, classify types of the flow by GIS based models (Geographic Information System), including areas changing by Satellite Image System; Finally, up scaling of knowledge and extending of data to the forecasting of the hazard at the regional scale is discussed and ways of improving in risk areas as well as quantitatively evaluating landslide susceptibility for modelling performance are proposed. Conclusion: (expected results /significance of research /contribution to the development) Education in the relationship of landslides triggered effects to rivers opens important pathways for other disaster research that is related in future, and It is a key insight from the learning sciences able response researching development. Using these methods as a composition in foundation for synthesizing evidence and data by well-vetted strategies such that researchers can enable entrepreneurs access learning and finding methods for solving landslide issues. Therefore, analyzing information processes by Physics, Satellite Image System, Geographic Information System (GIS) program and Modelling of Landslides Susceptibility Mapping can predict the movement of a landslide widely. For able controlling the status the flow of sediment, mud and debris delivery to stream; to predict sediment yield limits on rivers from development of reliable numerical models and sediment dynamic to evaluate results; can solving and improving impacts the infrastructure development; to management in rural areas, construction, agricultural practices, environmental, ecology system, forest area, land-use and water including economic and social. Reference: Spatial Patterns of Storm‐Induced Landslides and Their Relation to Rainfall Anomaly Maps - Marc - 2019 - Geophysical Research Letters - Wiley Online Library. mhtml. https: //agupubs. onlinelibrary. wiley. com/doi/full/10. 1029/2019GL083173 Landslide Debris Movement and its Effects on Slope and River Channel in Mountainous Watershed* By Marlon Ivanhoe AlP ASSA * *, Hokkaido University Collection of Scholarly and Academic Papers: HUSCAP (1991), https: //eprints. lib. hokudai. ac. jp/dspace/bitstream/2115/21346/1/48(2)_P375-418. pdf Two-dimensional mathematical modelling of debris flows with practical applications M. Cetina & M. Krzyk University of Ljubljana, Faculty of Civil and Geodetic Engineering, Ljubljana, Slovenia, 2003, https: //www. witpress. com/Secure/elibrary/papers/WP03/WP03042FU. pdf Physics and Modeling of Various Hazardous Landslides Jónas Elíasson * and Þorsteinn Sæmundsson, Faculty of Engineering and Natural Sciences, University of Iceland, 102 Reykjavík, Iceland; steinis@hi. is * Correspondence: jonase@hi. is; Tel. : +354-8998447, https: //www. mdpi. com/2076-3263/11/3/108/htm https: //www. climatestotravel. com/climate/laos
Introduction:

As impaction regarding
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landslides
has increased every year, the scientist's need to shape more effective solution practices has
also
increased.
However
, researching this issue will
necessarily
require integrating insights across multiple
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factors
that
are related
.
In general
, when long-time
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heavy
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rainfall
, soil and rock on
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hillslope
that is
susceptible will
be triggered
. It
significantly
influences the water quality,
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changes
in ground water-level and interrupts the stream
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flow
channels, which can
also
affect the ecology
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system
and cause destruction of the environment.
Finally
, those problems will
be associated
with the health effects for almost all creatures
directly
and
indirectly
.
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Landslides
are a serious phenomenon
geologically
common to almost every
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province
of Lao
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PDR
, and have frequency increases to follow extreme
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rainfall
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events
, global climate
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change
, human activities increase, continuous environmental disturbance, earthquake (seismic waves), destruction of forest
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area
, etc. This problem is able to obstruct the infrastructure
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development
of the country. Study about
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landslides
will
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use
knowledge in Physics for measuring gravity, Geographic
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Information
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System
(GIS) program and
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Modelling
of
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Landslides
Susceptibility Mapping for
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help
in analyzing the
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flow
of mass. It is of great significance to analyze region scales for reducing
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risk
of
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sediment
, mud and
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debris
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flow
to streams.
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So
, this article seeks to contribute to the method and technique
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development
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process
for
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disaster
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risk
prevention.

Literature review:

Landslides have become the most serious
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disasters
around hilly and mountainous
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areas
. The occurrence of
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landslides
mostly
depends on the terrain, including geological and geomorphological
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processes
, that might have the tendency and predisposing
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factors
to generate
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landslide
occurrence. Laos, the
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only
landlocked country in Southeast Asia, The Geography
is covered
with
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mountains
and forests. There are two seasons: Rainy and Dry. The temperature averages about 14/40 °C (
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57
/104 °F), which is tropical in the plains and is subtropical in the
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mountains
. The amount of
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rainfall
is
normally
between 1, 200 and 2, 200 millimeters (
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47
and 87 inches) per year,
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but
on
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mountain
slopes can exceed 3, 000 mm (118 in), which brings
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heavy
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rainfall
and high humidity during May to October, it is an additional amount of rain by the monsoon and typhoons. In fact, if the climate becomes milder with increasing altitude, it will
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become more rainy.
For example
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Prabang
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province
, a village of 41 households was
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destroyed
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landslide
and flash flood after
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heavy
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rainfall
, there are three roads connecting 17 villages in the district that have
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now
been
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off. (Reported by RFA’s Lao Service, On Aug. 30th and Sept. 5th 2018).
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and
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there were almost two weeks of
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, afforded to livelihood and killed
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people
by flooding and
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landslides
. (Reported by
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2013). Research
purpose:

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factors
in
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and which contribute to
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landslides
such as
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heavy
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rainfall
, climate
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change
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To
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use
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processes
in physics,
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modelling
,
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sediment
dynamic, GIS program and satellite image for following and classifying of the mass
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flow
, including
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use
analyze wasting when phenomena occurred.

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as a reference for additional learning about solving and controlling the
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risk
that affects
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lives
and properties.

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In this subject a methodology for hazardous
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landslides
, the using knowledge in physics and modeling them as a part of a
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disaster
prevention and reduction procedure by
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landslides
susceptibility and hazard maps
is presented
, based on analysis
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movements
and determinant
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factors
the flowing:

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, review
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information
about
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behaviour
of geology, geography and weather in the
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speciality
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hillslope
and
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,
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some
issues of the difficulties related with numerical modeling in
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risk
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, and survey on field work for collecting data and sample;

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some of the
major problems and the mechanisms at the local scale, and the directions of mass
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(sediment
particle) and
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Dynamic, classify types of the
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by GIS based models (Geographic
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, including
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changing by Satellite Image System;

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as well
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susceptibility for
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modelling
performance
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triggered effects to rivers opens
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important
pathways for other
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disaster
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research
that
is related
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in future
, and It is a key insight from the learning sciences able response researching
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development
. Using these methods as a composition in foundation for synthesizing evidence and data by well-vetted strategies such that researchers can enable entrepreneurs access learning and finding methods for solving
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landslide
issues.
Therefore
, analyzing
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information
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processes
by Physics, Satellite Image
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System
, Geographic
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of
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Landslides
Susceptibility Mapping can predict the
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movement
of a
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landslide
widely
. For able controlling the status the
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flow
of
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sediment
, mud and
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debris
delivery to stream; to predict
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sediment
yield limits on rivers from
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development
of reliable numerical models and
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sediment
dynamic to evaluate results; can solving and improving impacts the infrastructure
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development
; to management in rural
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areas
, construction, agricultural practices, environmental, ecology
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system
, forest
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area
, land-
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use
and water including economic and social.

Reference:

Spatial Patterns of
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Storm‐Induced
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Landslides
and Their Relation to
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Anomaly Maps
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2019
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Two-dimensional mathematical
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with practical applications M.
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Physics and Modeling of Various Hazardous
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