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The provided diagrams illustrate the working of power generators that use waves to produce power.

The provided diagrams illustrate the working of power generators that use waves to produce power. 7PLxA
The provided diagrams illustrate the working of power generators that use waves to produce power. Overall, it can be seen that the equipment is constructed at the sea wall in order to get maximum output. As can be seen, the apparatus consists of a chamber that is submerged into the ocean, and a column to protect the turbine. The rotating turbine is used to generate the power. Coming to working, when the wave is at its crest position, the air escapes out through the turbine, results in rotation in a clockwise direction whereas when the wave is at its trough position, the outside air enters into the chamber, in turn, allows turbine wheel to rotate in the same direction. This process continues to endless cycles to produce uninterrupted power to use for multiple purposes such as for industries, domestic, agriculture, and so on.
The provided diagrams illustrate the working of power generators that
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use
waves to produce power.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the equipment
is constructed
at the sea wall in order to
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get
maximum output.

As can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
, the apparatus consists of a chamber that
is submerged
into the ocean, and a column to protect the
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turbine
. The rotating
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turbine
is
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used
to generate the power.

Coming to working, when the wave is at its crest position, the air escapes out through the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbine
, results in rotation in a clockwise direction whereas when the wave is at its trough position, the outside air enters into the chamber, in turn,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
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turbine
wheel to rotate in the same direction. This process continues to endless cycles to produce uninterrupted power to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for multiple purposes such as for industries, domestic, agriculture, and
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so
on.
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IELTS academic The provided diagrams illustrate the working of power generators that use waves to produce power.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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