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tourist attraction in edinburgh

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It is clear from the line graph show that during the 1980s and 1995s, there was a significant increase in visitors to the castle from about 23% to nearly 45% and the proportion dropped gradually to 30% in 2010. The trend for the aquarium was similar to the castle. Visitors rose dramatically from 20% to around 35% between 1980 and 1985 and then gradually decreased to under 10% over the next twenty-five years. On the other hand, the proportion of tourists who visited the festival fluctuated slightly but in general, remained stable at about 25% from 1980 to 2010. Visitors to the zoo also fluctuated between 1980 and 2000 and then rose sharply from 10% to 20% from 2000 to 2010.

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show
 that during the 1980s and 1995s, there was a significant increase in visitors to the castle from about 23% to nearly
 45% and the proportion dropped gradually
 to 30% in 2010. The trend for the aquarium was similar to the castle. Visitors rose dramatically
 from 20% to around 35% between 1980 and 1985 and then gradually
 decreased to under 10% over the next
 twenty-five years. On the other hand
, the proportion of tourists who visited the festival fluctuated slightly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
in general
, remained stable at about 25% from 1980 to 2010. Visitors to the zoo also
 fluctuated between 1980 and 2000 and then rose sharply
 from 10% to 20% from 2000 to 2010. 