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three major exports of Southland in 2000, 2021 , and the prediction in 2025.

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The chart illustrates the three major exports of Southland in 2000, 2021, and the prediction in 2025. Overall, International tourism tends to grow in the future, while meat products likely to decrease slightly every year. However, dairy products are the most changes among three figures. International tourism could make money with around 8. 1 billion Euros in 2000. Moreover, it was the main export in this year. According to the bar chart, the International tourism are moderately rise until 2025. In 2021, Southland does improve it more than in the past by 8. 9 billion Euros. In 2025, there will be a steady increase in the number 9. 9 billion Euros. Dairy products started in 200 with 7 billion Euros in first exported. It clearly seen that in 2021, dairy products are significantly improved to 9. 9 billion Euros same as the tourism in 2025, on the contrary 2025, sales drop a bit. Meat products are not quite changing a lot, merely between 5 to 6 billion Euros. In 2000, the sales were 6 billion Euros. In 2021, it is approximately 5. 5 billion Euros, and in 2025 are around 5 billion Euros.
The chart illustrates the three major exports of Southland in 2000, 2021, and the prediction in 2025.

Overall
, International
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tends to grow in the future, while meat
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likely to decrease
slightly
every year.
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, dairy
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products
are the most
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among three figures.

International
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tourism
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money with around 8. 1
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billion
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, it was the main export in this year. According to the bar chart, the International
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tourism
are
moderately
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rise
until 2025. In 2021, Southland does
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it more than in the past by 8. 9
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Dairy
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2025, sales drop a bit.

Meat
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