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Population in urban areas

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The bar chart provides information about how the proportion of residence in urban areas changed over a century in 6 regions. Overall, in the years between 1950 and 2007 all six figures experienced an upward trend and according to the bar chart it is anticipated that the population in all regions will increase. Moreover, the most dramatic increase of population was made by Africa and Asia whereas the figures for Oceania showed the minimal changes. Regarding the initial percentages, Africa and Asia had the smallest percentage of people living in cities(15 and 17 percent respectively) while North America and Oceania ranked first in this regard(64 and 62 percent), which is followed by a remarkable boom in Asia in 2007 where the percentage tripled to 41 percent and predictions indicate that this number increase to 66 percent by the end of the period. Expectations show that North and Latin America will be the highest percentage of people living in towns (approximately 90 percent), Oceania will account for only 76 percent and Europe will accumulate 84 percent. In contrast, in Africa the percentage will be roughly 4 times as much as in 1950.
The bar chart provides information about how the proportion of residence in urban areas
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changed
over a century in 6 regions.

Overall
, in the years between 1950 and 2007 all six figures experienced an upward trend and according to the bar chart it
is anticipated
that the population in all regions will increase.
Moreover
, the most dramatic increase of population
was made
by Africa and Asia whereas the figures for Oceania
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showed
the minimal
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changes
.

Regarding the initial
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percentages
, Africa and Asia had the smallest
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percentage
of
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people
living in cities(15 and 17
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percent
respectively
) while North America and Oceania ranked
first
in this regard(64 and 62
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percent)
, which
is followed
by a remarkable boom in Asia in 2007 where the
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percentage
tripled to 41
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percent
and predictions indicate that this number increase to 66
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by the
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end
of the period.

Expectations
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show
that North and Latin America will be the highest
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percentage
of
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people
living in towns (approximately 90
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percent)
, Oceania will account for
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only
76
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and Europe will accumulate 84
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.
In contrast
, in Africa the
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will be roughly 4 times as much as in 1950.

IELTS academic Population in urban areas

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191 words
6.0
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