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Three different film genres

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of income from three different film genres - Romance, Comedies, and Action/Horror - for a Hollywood film studio between 1970 and 2000. Overall, the proportion of Romance films declined significantly, while Action/Horror films increased dramatically throughout that period of time. Besides, the figure for Comedies remained stable. According to the chart, the percentage of income from Romance films reached a peak of over 50% in 1970. Then, there was a drop slight to nearly 40% in 1980. In 2000, there was a dramatic decrease to the lowest figure at around 10%. In contrast, the percentage of income from Action/Horror movies witnessed a gradual rise from 10% to 15% between 1970 and 1990, then it nearly double to about 40% in 2000. Regarding the Comedies, the proportion of income saw a slight increase from about 33% to approximately 35% in the first half of the period. However, the figure for this genre dropped gradually to 30% in 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
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from three
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film genres
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Romance, Comedies, and Action/Horror
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for a Hollywood film studio between 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, the proportion of Romance films declined
significantly
, while Action/Horror films increased
dramatically
throughout that period of time.
Besides
, the figure for Comedies remained stable.

According to the chart, the percentage of
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income
from Romance films reached a peak of over 50% in 1970. Then, there was a drop slight to
nearly
40% in 1980. In 2000, there was a dramatic decrease to the lowest figure at around 10%.
In contrast
, the percentage of
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income
from Action/Horror movies witnessed a gradual rise from 10% to 15% between 1970 and 1990, then it
nearly
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double
to about 40% in 2000.

Regarding the Comedies, the proportion of
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income
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saw
a slight increase from about 33% to approximately 35% in the
first
half of the period.
However
, the figure for this genre dropped
gradually
to 30% in 2000.
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IELTS academic Three different film genres

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3 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
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