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Earnings of three different degree

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This line graph demonstrates the weekly income of people with different educational degree by variety of their age from 21to 60 years in 2002. Fistl, earnings of one with a higher degree increased steeply until the age of 41 to 45, after that the income drop slightly, followed by a sharp increase in the amount of around 790£ which is the highest point for the age 60. On the other hand, first degree education made the lowest income for both younger and elderly people with the same trend as the higher degree group. Furthermore, an employee with a not higher degree nor first degree called the other qualification group has the highest wages in the age of 21 to 45 afterwards, in 46 to around 52 this group earn as much as people with higher education. Surprisingly, after the around 53we can see a downward trend which leads to a lower income in 60 year old the same as the first degree group. In general, we can see a sharp increase for all educational degree groups, from 21 years to 40 years old and after that except for the higher educational employees, others face a slight decrease in their income over time.

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