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The given table shows information regarding the ages of 11 - 14 participating in extreme sports in the UK by gender in 2003.

The given table shows information regarding the ages of 11 - 14 participating in extreme sports in the UK by gender in 2003. 6x51x
The given table shows information regarding the ages of 11 - 14 participating in extreme sports in the UK by gender in 2003. Overall, the averages of the total for rollerblading in 2003 were the highest at 26. 6%, snowboarding was the lowest at 6. 1%, according to the table. The percentages of 11 - 14 years old males who participated in each extreme sport were higher than females. Firstly, the percentages of 11 - 14 years old males who participated in skateboarding in 2003 were the highest at 27. 5%, snowboarding was the lowest at 8. 1%. However, the percentages of 11 - 14 years old females who participated in rollerblading in 2003 were the highest at 31. 7%, snowboarding was the lowest at 4%. In other words, not many males and females were not interested in taking part in snowboarding. Lastly, the percentages of 11-14 years old males who participated in mountain climbing in 2003 were 1, 3% higher than females. Mountain biking by males was 9. 4% higher than female.
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participating in extreme sports in the UK by gender in 2003.

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in each extreme sport were higher than females.

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in skateboarding in 2003 were the highest at 27. 5%, snowboarding was the lowest at 8. 1%.
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in rollerblading in
2003 were the highest at 31. 7%, snowboarding was the lowest at 4%.
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were not interested in taking part in snowboarding.
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of 11-14 years
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in mountain climbing in 2003 were 1, 3% higher than
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IELTS academic The given table shows information regarding the ages of 11 - 14 participating in extreme sports in the UK by gender in 2003.

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