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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your idea and experience

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your idea and experience 6x5jB
These days, making dishes has become easier than in the past because of the use of modern technology and greater availability of ingredients in local areas and I believes that this has led to positive improvements for individuals as they able to save time and experience plethora of international cuisine. Firstly, preparing dishes are very easy nowadays. Same type of cuisines which we made in just a few minutes it takes lots of time in the past, as time saved in the kitchen can be invested elsewhere. For example, Todays mixing machines can create dough within ten minutes whereas same process took an hour of kneading by hands. Further more, baking that dough into leaf of bread is achieved in an hour with ovens but in the past this process takes about 3 hours because which is done by wood slave so saved hours could be spent with family or elsewhere. Like i have seen my grandma spent number of hours in kitchen to put quality of meal on the table but these days my mom done same work in an hour. Secondly, it has become simpler to prepare meals from around the world because of availability of international ingredients found in the local stores and supermarkets some of that overseas ingredients contain plenty of nutritious. About hundreds of year ago local grocers offers only ingredients that are grown in region but nowadays local stores and supermarkets offers international ingredients. For example, in my family we have different international food night like Italian food night, french food night ans so on. Which dishes are ease to prepare and also contain plenty of nutritious. In conclusion, the availability of latest technology and overseas ingredients living style and prepare food quickly than in the past and with the help of these ingredients we can prepare more nutritious food at home.
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use
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ingredients
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local
areas and I
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believes
that this has led to
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positive
improvements for individuals as
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they
able to save time and experience plethora of
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international
cuisine.

Firstly
, preparing dishes are
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very
easy nowadays. Same type of cuisines which we made in
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just
a few minutes it takes lots of time in the
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past
, as time saved in the kitchen can
be invested
elsewhere.
For example
,
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Todays
mixing machines can create dough within ten minutes whereas same process took an
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hour
of kneading by hands.
Further
more, baking that dough into leaf of bread
is achieved
in an
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hour
with ovens
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but
in the
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past
this process takes about 3
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hours
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because
which
is done
by wood slave
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so
saved
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hours
could
be spent
with family or elsewhere. Like
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i
have
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my grandma spent number of
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hours
in kitchen to put quality of meal on the table
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but
these days my mom done same work in an hour.

Secondly
, it has become simpler to
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prepare
meals from around the world
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because
of availability of
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international
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ingredients
found in the
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local
stores and supermarkets
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some
of that overseas
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ingredients
contain
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plenty
of nutritious. About hundreds of year ago
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local
grocers offers
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only
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ingredients
that
are grown
in region
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but
nowadays
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local
stores and supermarkets offers
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international
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ingredients
.
For example
, in my family we have
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different
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international
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food
night like Italian
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food
night,
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french
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food
night ans
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on. Which dishes are
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ease
to
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and
also
contain
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plenty
of nutritious.

In conclusion
, the availability of
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latest
technology and overseas
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ingredients
living style and
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prepare
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food
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quickly
than in the
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and with the
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help
of these
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ingredients
we can
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prepare
more nutritious
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food
at home.
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IELTS academic Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your idea and experience

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