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Three different crimes, England and Wales (1970-2005)

Three different crimes, England and Wales (1970-2005) 26a0J
This chart revaels top three varieties of crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005. Misdeeds such as car theft house bulgary and street robbery were fluctuated in rhis countries. In this chart we can see that theft of a vehicle was one of the common criminals. From 1970s to 1990 it started rising slowly and in the 1995s it reached to its peak about 1. 6 billion crimes and after that it went down slowly. The second crime which is 2 times less than first one, nearly 2 millions of house burglaries. For 15 years it grew up from 2 million to 4 million and as car theft it grew up sharply in 1995 and started plumming again in 2000s. Last crime is nearly was not and even did not rise to million.
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in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005. Misdeeds such as car theft
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bulgary
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that theft of a vehicle was one of the common criminals. From 1970s to 1990 it
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started
rising
slowly
and in the 1995s it reached to its peak about 1. 6 billion
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and after that it went down
slowly
. The second
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burglaries. For 15 years it grew up from 2
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to 4
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and as car theft it grew up
sharply
in 1995 and
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plumming
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. Last
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IELTS academic Three different crimes, England and Wales (1970-2005)

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