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Diagram of central heating system

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This diagram provides an overview of a domestic central heating system. It shows how the tank, boiler and pipes ensure a constant flow of hot water to both the radiators and the taps. The cold water enters the house and is stored in a water storage tank in the roof. Form there it flows down to the boiler, located in the ground floor of the house. The boiler, which is fuelled by gas or oil, heats up the water as it passes through it. The hot water is then pumped round the house through a system of pipes and flows into the radiators, located in different rooms. The water circulates through the radiators, which have small tubes inside them to help the distribute the heat, and this warms each of the rooms. Some of the water is directed to the taps to provide hot water for the house. Once the water has been through the pipes and radiators, it is returned to the boiler to be repeated and circulated round the house again.
This diagram provides an overview of a domestic central heating system. It
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shows
how the tank,
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boiler
and pipes ensure a constant flow of hot
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water
to both the
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radiators
and the taps.

The
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cold
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water
enters the
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house
and
is stored
in a
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water
storage tank in the roof. Form there it flows down to the
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boiler
, located in the
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ground floor
of the
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house
.

The
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boiler
, which
is fuelled
by gas or oil, heats up the
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water
as it passes
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through
it. The hot
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water
is then pumped round the
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house
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through
a system of pipes and flows into the
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radiators
, located in
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different
rooms.
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The
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water
circulates
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through
the
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radiators
, which have
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small
tubes inside them to
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help
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the distribute
the heat, and this warms each of the rooms.
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Some of the
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water
is directed
to the taps to provide hot
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water
for the
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house
.

Once the
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water
has been
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through
the pipes and
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radiators
, it
is returned
to the
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boiler
to
be repeated
and circulated round the
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house
again.

IELTS academic Diagram of central heating system

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  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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