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The line graph illustrates the numbers of cars in thousands, which were owned by individuals from year 1961 to year 2001 in Great Britain. There were 70, 000 people in the beginning of the period of observation, who had not a single own car. But after a period of ten years the numbers of people, who had not own car were sharply decreased and reached up to 38, 000. In the year 2001 only ten thousand people left, who had not personal cars. At the first year, below 50, 000 people had own 1 car. After decades the numbers of people were minimally rose and in 1981, it remain constant up to year. For the next twenty years, the numbers were fluctuated and at the end of the period of observation, approximately 40, 000 people had minimum one personal car. In year 1961, there were only 10, 000 people, who had two own cars. Total 20, 000 numbers of people were risen in ten years periods. At the final year the numbers of people having 2 cars, climbed and reached up to 49, 000. Overall, the number of people who had personal one or two cars, were escalated in the end of the period of observation as well as there were dramatically dropped in numbers of people, who had the not personal car.
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