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Process of making coffee

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The given diagram illustrates the steps of manufacturing coffee. Initially, the coffee beans are collected from field by workers and dried under the sun. Then, collected beans are roasted in roasting oven and cool rapidly at high temperature. Following this, coffee beans are ground in grinding machine. After that, beans are mixed with hot water in a jar and strain is removed in this mixture. Probing ahead, the mixture is frozen and again passed to grinder. Subsequently, frozen liquid is dried in a vacuum. Finally, coffee powder is ready and packed into jars for delivery to shops. Generally speaking, it is crystal clear from diagram that the production of coffee involve various different steps. It begins with collecting beans and ends with packaging.
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given
diagram illustrates the steps of manufacturing
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coffee
.
Initially
, the
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coffee
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beans
are collected
from field by workers and dried under the sun. Then, collected
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beans
are roasted
in roasting oven and cool
rapidly
at high temperature. Following this,
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coffee
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beans
are ground
in grinding machine. After that,
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beans
are mixed
with hot water in a jar and strain
is removed
in this mixture. Probing ahead, the mixture
is frozen
and again passed to grinder.
Subsequently
, frozen liquid
is dried
in a vacuum.
Finally
,
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coffee
powder is ready and packed into jars for delivery to shops.
Generally
speaking, it is crystal
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clear
from diagram that the production of
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coffee
involve various
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different
steps. It
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begins
with collecting
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beans
and ends with packaging.
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IELTS academic Process of making coffee

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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