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the amounts of waste produced by three companies

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Here the Graph Clearly shows that the amount of waste produced by each company over a particular period of time. In The year 2000 Company A produces 12 tonnes of waste, company b produces around 8 tonnes of waste and company c produces 4 tonnes of waste. In The Year 2005, The waste produced by the company is reduced and company b Gradually increased the waste intones in five years period of time and company c also increased their production of waste over the duration of 5 years period of time In the Year 2010 to2015, the production of waste of company A would decrease gradually year after year where as the company initially The waste is Increased and then it decreased. while comparing to company a and c, company B reduced the production of waste, and company C it is fluctuating in increasing the waste At last company C also Increased in production of waste in a larger amount.
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produced by each
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company
over a particular period of time. In The
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2000
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A produces
12 tonnes of
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,
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b produces around 8 tonnes of
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and
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c produces 4 tonnes of waste.

In The
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2005, The
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waste
produced by the
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is
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and
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b
Gradually
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the
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waste
intones in five years period of time and
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company
c
also
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increased
their
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of
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over the duration of 5 years period of time

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the
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2010 to2015, the
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production
of
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of
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company
A would decrease
gradually
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after
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as the
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initially
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is
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and then it decreased.
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while
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company
a and c,
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B
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, and
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C it is fluctuating in increasing the
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C
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IELTS academic the amounts of waste produced by three companies

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3 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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