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The table illustrates the number about how many Japanese tourists travelled overseas, over an eleven-yeear period between 2005 and 2006.

The table illustrates the number about how many Japanese tourists travelled overseas, over an eleven-yeear period between 2005 and 2006. ljQrW
According to the table, we can see that the number of tourists during the first two-month period rose considerably in 2005. having remained stable at approximately 1634000 in the August and September months, it saw a negligible fall again in 2005. Another interesting point is that in October and November it had a stable number of tourists about 1500700 in 2005. By contrast, the number of tourists fell sightly in December in 2005. Regarding the number of tourists in January, it went down marginally. Taking fluctuated around 1370000 number of tourists in January and February in 2006, it saw a considerable rise in March. By contrast, the figure for tourists fell significantly in April and saw a negligible increase. Overall, the highest number of tourists is noticed in September and August. With the respect to the table, it saw the lowest number of tourists in April in 2006.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the number about how many Japanese tourists travelled overseas, over an eleven-yeear period between 2005 and 2006.

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