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Though modern life is much facilitated by automobiles, it would have been better if they were not invented.Do you agree with this statement?

Though modern life is much facilitated by automobiles, it would have been better if they were not invented. X7De8
Whith the revolution of transport sector automobiles have become increasingly popular among the certain demographic of society. Some people claim that invented of automobiles was unnecessary. This essay will argue that invention of cars are always being a land mark of every each field and I disagree with this statement. Some people naturally feel fear about vehicles because of incidents they have had heard. It is commonly seen that accidents are increasing steadily due to the excessive cars. Furthermore global temperature has been risen cause by vihicles. Most people justifiably worry about pollution of aire and noice. For example, scientists haa cited that Osone layer has been damaged year by year. But the idea that automobiles are unnecessary is preposterous idea as well as ill informative. Despite miner risk associated with automobiles it provides tremendous benefits for mankind. Firlatly, they can communate any where they wish. Due to the automobile destination has become just only word. Moreover it robust country’s economy as well. Nowadays automobiles are compulsory requirement of develope the country. Because without vehicle government and individuals can’t fulfill their needs. automatic play a crucial role in day today life. This essay will argue that people who are disagree with notion of vehicles, they are not able to gain advantages of automobiles. With regarding automobiles, advantages overweight disadvantages.
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the revolution of transport sector
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automobiles
have become
increasingly
popular among the certain demographic of society.
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Some
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people
claim that invented of
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automobiles
was unnecessary. This essay will argue that invention of cars are always being a land mark of every each field and I disagree with this statement.
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Some
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people
naturally
feel fear about vehicles
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because
of incidents they have had heard. It is
commonly
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seen
that accidents are increasing
steadily
due to the excessive cars.
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Furthermore
global temperature has
been risen
cause by
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vihicles
. Most
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people
justifiably
worry about pollution of
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aire
and
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noice
.
For example
, scientists
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haa
cited that
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Osone
layer has
been damaged
year by year.
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But
the
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idea
that
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automobiles
are unnecessary is preposterous
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idea
as well
as ill informative. Despite miner
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risk
associated with
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automobiles
it provides tremendous benefits for mankind.
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Firlatly
, they can
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communate
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any where
they wish. Due to the
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automobile
destination has become
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just
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only
word.
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Moreover
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it
robust country’s economy
as well
. Nowadays
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automobiles
are compulsory requirement of
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develope
the country.
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Because
without vehicle
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government
and individuals can’t fulfill their needs.
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automatic
play a crucial role in day
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today
life. This essay will argue that
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people
who are
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disagree
with notion of vehicles, they are not able to gain advantages of
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automobiles
. With regarding
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automobiles
, advantages overweight disadvantages.
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IELTS academic Though modern life is much facilitated by automobiles, it would have been better if they were not invented.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
219 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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