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The given bar chart illustrates the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity during the year 2014.

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The given bar chart illustrates the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity during the year 2014. Overall we can see that both countries China and the United States had the most amount of produce and consumption of electricity. Europe countries which are Germany, Canada, Brazil and France around 500 billion Kwh for electricity of production and consumption however these countries amount of production same of their consumption’s amount. Secondly Asian countries such as Japan, India had the most production and consumption of electricity at around 800 and 900 billion kWh and one of the other Asian countries, Korea, had nearly halved the amount at around 480 than other Asian countries. Russia significantly plunged the area of production and consumption of electricity at around 1, 000 billion kWh, the figure halved the amount of consumption and electricity at around 500 kWh.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart illustrates the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity during the year 2014.

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