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Effects of Global Warning

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A group of individuals are inclined to think that the topic of global warming. It has many effects on the environment. Atmost one is it effects our global temperature. Due to rising temperature it will cause in melting glaciers. For example, recent study of Indian express newspaper they have shown that north pole is facing fluctuations in temperature. If more glaciers will melt then it results, sea level will rise. Sometimes it causes floods and droughts to the nations
A group of individuals
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are
inclined to
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think
that the topic of global warming. It has
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many
effects on the environment.
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Atmost
one is it effects our global temperature. Due to rising temperature it will cause in melting glaciers.
For example
, recent study of Indian express newspaper they have shown that
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north pole
is facing fluctuations in temperature. If more glaciers
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will melt
then it results, sea level will rise.
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Sometimes
it causes floods and droughts to the
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nations
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IELTS academic Effects of Global Warning

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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