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Thistable shows how many people used different formof public transport

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This table provides information about the number of people used peculiar form of government transport in milan between the yeras 2010 to 2014. Overall, there were five modes of vehicles used by the person travelling from one place to another. Here, all the transport vehicles were gradually increased. It is clear to see the table, people like to move on train have significant rise in the following years because it reached 1. 4 million in the year 2010 then the two years later a considerable growth. 1. 8 in the year 2012. after two years later, it reached double the amount 3. 6 to surge in the year 2014. People love to travel bus and trans also slightly increased in the past years. It is viewed from the table, the oerson who has interested to move on a particular place through taxis were sustainable growth and metro also rised up from 3. 0 million in the year 2010 to 5. 0 million in the year 2014
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2014.
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