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The pie chart gives information about the kind of movie genre that won of Oscar in 2003 and 2008.

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The pie chart gives information about the kind of movie genre that won of Oscar in 2003 and 2008. In general, the most Oscar winners was thriller genre and the least of Oscar winner was comedy genre from 2003 to 2008. It is clear from the pie chart shows that very variated the winners of Oscar in comparison within 2003 and 2008. In 2003, nearly a half Oscar winners by thriller genre and just over a third in 2008. In 2003, the Oscar winner of the action genre was just over a quarter, but it was increased slightly in 2008. Otherwise, from 2003 to 2008 the winners of Oscar was the horror genre, it was decreased to approximately half. However, the comedy genre was constant as the Oscar winners, it was just about 10 per cent. Furthermore, the documentary genre was just over 25 per cent of the winners of Oscar in 2003 and 2008. On the other hand, the science-fiction in 2003 was lower than 2008 the Oscar winners.
The pie chart gives information about the kind of movie
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that won of Oscar in 2003 and 2008.

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, the most Oscar
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winners
was thriller
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and the least of Oscar
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was comedy
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genre
from 2003 to 2008.

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by thriller
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over a third in 2008. In 2003, the Oscar
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of the action
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of Oscar was the horror
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, it
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was constant as the Oscar
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, it was
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of Oscar in 2003 and 2008.
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