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The graph illustrates Australian Universities about a decade of foreign students enrolment and Australian students enrolment.

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The graph illustrates Australian Universities about a decade of foreign students enrolment and Australian students enrolment. Overall, total students to apply are higher in case of Australian students but very low when compared with foreign students. Australian students to apply for Australian Universities is 4, 00, 000 in year 2001 and 6, 00, 000 plus in year 2010, increase in the students over the decade is half of year 2001. Foreign students applications started from 2, 000 in year 2001 to 8, 000 plus in year 2010, in this case growth in number is four times of year 2001. When comparing both enrolments local students are high but when we consider it in percentage of their growth foreign students is higher. Australian students who made their place are almost to 2, 00, 000 in 2001, crossed over 2, 00, 000 in 2002 and remaining years over the decade the number of students is around 2, 00, 000. Foreign students who got into universities are around 1000 to begin and gradually rose over the decade and reached 4, 000 plus.
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