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This two maps determine which parts of Colwick Arts center in 2005 and now are different.

This two maps determine which parts of Colwick Arts center in 2005 and now are different. brWrl
This two maps determine which parts of Colwick Arts center in 2005 and now are different. In the past there were two galleries and there was not square in the middle of the art center. It did not have café and today the snack bar is deleted from this area. Totally you can see many differences from past to now. Today the cinema and concert hall are separated. In addition, the wasteland is developed and the trees have been planted and the stage has been built. Toilet is moved to opposite side. Furthermore, it had one big meeting room that is change to two small meeting room. The café is constructed in southwest of gallery and the drama studio has been built between cinema and meeting room 1. Two galleries changed to one and the concert hall and cinema are developed and today both of them have different building. As you see he only place that has not been moved and has been in the first place since 2005 is information desk. To sum up, if check the map carefully you can find many changes since 2005.
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today
the snack bar
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from this area.
Totally
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differences from past to
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, the wasteland
is developed
and the trees have
been planted
and the stage has
been built
. Toilet is
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in southwest of gallery and the drama studio has
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place that has not been
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and has been in the
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you can find
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