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This table chart indicate the data of pupil who used various mode of traveling in Milan it depict 5 year value from 2010 to 2014. In that almost all mode of transport were increased year by year like train, trams, taxis and metro but in bus it was slightly decresed in 2011 then goes up and reached 2. 4 million in 2014. There had been a taxis when it was start people used to travel was 0. 6 in 2010 then slowly and gredually it was reach 1 million in 2014. While, trains and trams started at the same lavel in 2010 1. 4 and 1. 3 million respectively then both went up and trams reached 2. 2 million in 2014 but trains was trend to upward and touch second highest mode of transport choose was 3. 6 at the end. Lastly, metro was the first priority of people in all year like in 2010 it was 3 million and then it climb up to 5 million in 2014. Finally, it shows that taxis was low in prefrence of transport in Milan for public and metro was first choice.
This table chart indicate the data of pupil who
used
various mode of traveling in Milan it
depict
5
year
value from 2010 to 2014.

In that almost all mode of transport
were increased
year
by
year
like train, trams, taxis and metro
but
in bus it was
slightly
decresed
in 2011 then goes up and reached 2. 4
million
in 2014.

There had been a taxis when it was
start
people
used
to travel was 0. 6 in 2010 then
slowly
and
gredually
it was reach 1
million
in 2014. While, trains and trams
started
at the same
lavel
in 2010 1. 4 and 1. 3
million
respectively
then both went up and trams reached 2. 2
million
in 2014
but
trains was trend to upward and touch second highest mode of transport choose was 3. 6 at the
end
.
Lastly
, metro was the
first
priority of
people
in all
year
like in 2010 it was 3
million
and then it
climb
up to 5
million
in 2014.

Finally
, it
shows
that taxis was low in
prefrence
of transport in Milan for public and metro was
first
choice.
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