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This bar chart shows the percentage of Australian graduates in full-time employment four months after graduating ,between 1995 and 2001. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

This bar chart shows the percentage of Australian graduates in full-time employment four months after graduating, between 1995 and 2001. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. 26Bjk

The bar chart illustrates the information about the percentage of Australian graduates, who were employed full-time four months after graduation, from 1995 to 2001. To begin with, it is clear that the quantity of employment grew during the 6 years for both genders, but the percentage of women was frequently lower than the men in work, in 2001. in 1995 only 80% of male graduates were working. And the female graduates steadily increased in 1995 from 78% to 83% in 2001. In 1996 to 2000 there was a general increase during the 6 years, but then it came down. This was especially seen in 2000, when it increased about two percent to the top, only 84%, which went down to 83% in 2001. As for male workers, these started to rise from 1996. If we talk about the number of women, it did not change from 2000 to 2001. To sum up, in 2001 employment numbers were the same for male and female.

The bar chart illustrates the information about the percentage of Australian graduates, who were employed
 full-time four months after graduation, from 1995 to 2001.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the quantity of employment grew during the 6 years for both genders, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the percentage of women was frequently
 lower than the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 in work, in 2001.

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in
 1995 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 80% of male graduates were working. And the female graduates steadily
 increased in 1995 from 78% to 83% in 2001. In 1996 to 2000 there was a general increase during the 6 years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 then it came down.

This was especially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in 2000, when it increased about two percent to the top, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 84%, which went down to 83% in 2001. As for male workers, these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to rise from 1996. If we talk about the number of women, it did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 from 2000 to 2001.

To sum up, in 2001 employment numbers were the same for male and female. 