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The given diagram reflects the total use of water globally by different sectors over the past hundred years.

The given diagram reflects the total use of water globally by different sectors over the past hundred years. gGoLl
The given diagram reflects the total use of water globally by different sectors over the past hundred years. In the graph, the total amount of water used in agriculture, industrial use and domestic use has been exploited over each ten years. Also, the water consumption per person in Brazil and Congo in 2000 has been arranged in the table. In early 1900, each of the water consuming sectors used a very low amount of water except the agricultural sector. Over 100 years, this scenario is still the same. Though all of the sectors have increased water use every ten years little by little, agricultural water consumption has increased dramatically from other sectors. Around 2800 Kilometer cubes to 3000 kilometer cubes of water has been used in agricultural developments globally in the year 2000. While considering sole countries, Brazil, having more agricultural lands to be irrigated consumed three hundreds and fifty nine meter cube of water per person. Whereas, small country like Congo, having a short area of irrigated land, spent eight meter cube water on each person, which is relatively lower than the consumption by Brazil.
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diagram reflects the total
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use
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water
globally by
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different
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sectors
over the past hundred years. In the graph, the total amount of
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water
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used
in agriculture, industrial
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use
and domestic
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use
has
been exploited
over each ten years.
Also
, the
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water
consumption per person in Brazil and Congo in 2000 has
been arranged
in the table.

In early 1900, each of the
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water
consuming
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sectors
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used
a
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very
low amount of
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water
except the
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agricultural
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sector
. Over 100 years, this scenario is
still
the same. Though
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all of the
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sectors
have increased
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water
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use
every ten years
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little
by
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little
,
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agricultural
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water
consumption has increased
dramatically
from other
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sectors
. Around 2800 Kilometer cubes to 3000 kilometer cubes of
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water
has been
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used
in
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agricultural
developments globally in the
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year
2000.

While considering sole countries, Brazil, having more
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agricultural
lands to
be irrigated
consumed three hundreds and
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fifty nine
meter
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cube
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water
per person. Whereas,
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small
country like Congo, having a short area of irrigated land, spent eight meter cube
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water
on each person, which is
relatively
lower than the consumption by Brazil.
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IELTS academic The given diagram reflects the total use of water globally by different sectors over the past hundred years.

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